I've never done a story like this. And the style of writing is different as well. I hope you will enjoy it anyway. :)
Enjoy.
For some death is a doorway. For some it comes to soon. But it must come, for all. For it is appointed unto men once to die, and after this, the judgement.
The clock strikes eleven. There is an empty silence felt. It
is real- more real than anything felt. It is a heavy silence. A silence that
can mean only one thing. Death has arrived.
If you stood
in the empty hall of this Victorian-era home, you would stare at the varnished
grandfather clock standing like a sentry in the corner. You would note the time
that Margaret Dale passed from this life, and you would remember.
If you were
Margaret’s daughter, Louisa, you would have walked into the second room on the
left, and watched her departure. You would have gripped her hand, and begged
her not to go, even if ninety-three was a nice long life.
But you are not
Louisa, and if you were, you would be brought to the understanding that all
have a time appointed to them, and your mother’s time is up.
She looks at
the ceiling, her face glowing with a joy you may have never witnessed. Louisa
holds her hand even tighter. She is not willing to let go. You want to go to
her, but you are a spectator. You cannot be part of the scene. No one is aware
of your presence. You are here to learn.
“I see the
angels,” Margaret breathes, the lines around her eyes- once so shrouded, now
clear- turning into a smile. “They are singing.”
Louisa strokes
her mother’s white hair, once a deep shade of chestnut. “Mother, oh mother, I’m
not ready.”
If you looked
around the room, you would notice something immediately. Not the large
four-poster bed, or the colorful carpet of red and gold, or the antique bureau.
No, you would feel, see, the complete emptiness of the room. There is no one at
the bedside, or in the entire house, but Margaret and her loving daughter.
4 comments:
I love it! It looks really interesting. :)
It's...mysterious. You should continue with this story!
I love it!! It grabbed me from the very first sentence! You should definitely finish this:)
Wow, Bethany, such an awesome idea! I'd love to see more of it! ^_^
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