Hello everyone. *Sheepish* If you haven't noticed, I took a bit of a blogging break the last couple weeks. My life has just been insane, and I needed some time to evaluate and figure out what I'm doing on the blog and whatnot. Anyway, I'm taking part in NaNoWriMo this year, which is insane! But I'm on schedule... actually a little ahead. In case you don't know what NaNo is, here's the long and short: I'm trying to write 50,000 words of a novel in just the month of November. That's why NaNoWriMo stands for National Novel Writing Month.
So today... on Day 5 of NaNo, I've decided to share with you a little about the novel I am writing.
Title: Up The Scarlet Staircase
Genre: YA Christian Dystopian
Age Range: 12 and up
My bad Back Cover Copy:
Max was raised in the facility. It's all he knows. Every since disease wiped out the greater portion of the world's children, things have changed dramatically. Children are kept in special air filtered facilities, supervised by Doctors who look out for their well being, searching for a cure.
Max is almost thirteen, and when he turns that age, he will be sent to an all boys facility, and separated from his only friend Aimee.
But age is not the only thing Max has to worry about.
A small window in his room's doorway allows him to see out into the hall where a mysterious red staircase climbs. And sometimes he sees children taken up the staircase... and never brought back down again. When one of his worst fears comes true, Max decides to leave the facility to find the family he knows he must have, even if it means walking through poisoned air to get there.
But the Doctors are not so eager to let one of their children leave.
Here's a collage of a few characters:
Max is my male main character, while Sharron is my female main character. Aimee is Max's friend, and Valen Steward is a leading Scientist/Doctor.
Here's a few songs on my writing playlist. I'm not a huge fan of some of the songs, but they fit my novel really well. The words, especially.
Radioactive – Imagine Dragons
The Broken Ones – Dia Frampton
Song of The Caged Bird – Lindsey Sterling
Safe and Sound – Taylor Swift
And for your reading pleasure... or maybe not so much pleasure... here are a few snippets that I've written thus far.
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There once was a boy named Jimmy Swift. He was
eleven. He was the first to die.
~
Our removal of children from the
home was a necessary step in the protection of our future, and the future of
the children. ~ Doctor Valen Steward
~
The doctor was headed for the staircase. When you think of a staircase
you see a flight of steps leading to a specified location. But this staircase
was different. It lead to a place that was unknown, and its color was scarlet
as blood.
~
“This facility
was built for the protection of you all. You live here because you are being
protected. You should feel honored, and want to serve the Director with all
that you can. He was appointed by an act of science- a disease- to lead us, and
with science we will succeed in all things we so wish to accomplish. The
Director has plans for all of you. You may become a worker in any facet of the
jobs we provide: research assistant, instructor, or perhaps even a gold star
scientist yourself. Anything can be accomplished with hard work, and when you
are eighteen, you may decide which course you would like to approach.” ~ Professor Maclemore
~
Aimee stuck her
feet down, letting the rubber scrape against the gravel under foot. “Of course
it matters. You’re the smartest kid I know Max. I think one day you will be a
Scientist- one of the Doctors. Maybe you’ll be in charge of your own facility.”
Max shook his
head. “I don’t want my own facility.”
Aimee turned to
look at him. “Do you hate it here so much?”
He shrugged,
glancing at the children who ran on the track, played in the sand boxes, and
swung on ropes. “It is all I have known. How could I hate it?”
She stood,
walking to him. “Why do you talk like you do then?”
Max shrugged
his shoulder, wondering if he should tell Aimee the worries plaguing him. “It’s
the staircase, Aimee. It’s strange how that boy… I haven’t seen him since
Doctor Ryland took him up it.”
~
Doctor Ryland pressed a button on her wristband, and a holoboard
appeared. She studied it for a moment. “For now we will only need a sample from
Aimee.”
Max felt his
muscles tighten. It made him uncomfortable that Aimee was the only one having
to have her blood taken. Why shouldn’t they take his? He was scheduled for
sooner relocation. Or were they focusing on the girls?
~
“This is where
we filter the air. It comes in through some of the panels, and is filtered on
its way down here, where it is dispersed to the entire facility.”
Sharron
nodded, pretending to listen, though she knew about filtering methods already.
She hadn’t seen a dome designed like this one before, though.
“Sounds
complicated,” she said, acting as if she was a greenie with no experience
whatsoever.
He smirked. “It
does, but it isn’t too hard to understand. It just requires experience to
figure out, like most things here.”
~
Science is the one thing you can always
count on. With science you can accomplish anything. We are seeking to use
science to find a cure. We will find
a cure. Because science is everything. ~ Doctor Valen Steward
~
“I want you to know that was you saw was nothing. There is nothing devious going on here. We are simply working for the betterment of all of you children, nothing more. Whatever you saw last night… you should forget. It is for your better interest.” ~ Doctor Ryalnd
~
In a few
moments the men exited along with Doctor Ryland. The door shut behind them.
Max ran to it,
slamming his fists against the metal. “Let me out! Where are you taking her?
Please! He climbed on top of his stool, peering into the hall, desperate for
any sign of his friend.
Doctor Ryland
had her… was pulling her across the hall… toward the scarlet staircase.
“No!” he
screamed, aware that his voice might not even carry into the hall. “No! Take me
instead! Let her go! Aimee! Aimee!”
~
“My name is Sharron. I lived in a facility too.”
He looked at
her again, and this time there was a glimmer of curiosity in his eyes. “You?
But aren’t you one of them?”
Her heart
pounded. She hoped their words hadn’t been picked up by some bugging system
installed in the Activity Center. “Not exactly. I’m an assistant.”
He looked up. “You
mean… you’re one of the people they say we can be someday?”
She smiled at his wording. “Something
like that.” ~
Annnndddd I've probably posted too much already. Have a good evening!
~ a rambling author
4 comments:
I love the mock cover you made! So neat. (Also, completely jealous of your word count. I'm ahead, but not as far as you!)
Happy NaNoing!
~Sarah Faulkner
www.inklinedwriters.blogspot.com
Sarah: Haha thanks! I'm glad someone likes it. Apparently there's a few things I need to change. ;) Well... let's hope I don't get too behind later this month... my life is insane! :P
Ooh. Your snippets seem awesome. I want to read the rest of the book now... And maybe throttle a few scientists. *whistle*
NaNo is awesome (though I'm sure you know this). I'm doing it this year, though I am a tad bit behind. I found your profile to look at your stats... You're doing really well!
I love that mock cover you made, too. :)
Your novel sound really interesting, and the excerpts were great! :)
Good luck with NaNo!
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